Showing posts with label General Comments. Show all posts
Showing posts with label General Comments. Show all posts

Monday, June 30, 2014

CA6 - General Comments

PRONUNCIATION

As usual, a few difficult words appeared in this exercise. Here you have a list with some of the trickiest words for CA6. As you can see, many of them are related to health topics. I recommend you use the online audio dictionary http://www.howjsay.com to hear the pronunciation and practice.

headache
primary
composed
since
That's very cold!
fever
pressure
university
plane
temperature
worried
disease
enough
medicine
breathe
retired
eye
patient


EXCELLENT EXPRESSIONS

In this section, you’ll see many excellent expressions that you used in CA6. In general, your work for this activity was exceptional! You should all be very proud! I recommend you have a look at the phrases here because I’m sure you’ll find something new or useful.

Excellent questions

  • Good morning, Doctor. You're new, aren't you?
  • I had an appointment with Dr. Garcia. Where is he?
  • Do you have any allergies?
  • Doctor, what's happening to me?
  • How long have you been having these symptoms?
  • How long have you had this problem?
  • Do you have any health problems or any previous illness that you have to tell me?
  • Do you have a sedentary job?

Excellent sentences

  • Dr. Mateo has been transferred to another hospital. I think I’m going to be your new doctor.
  • Perhaps if you have high cholesterol you should eat lean meat.
  • If the symptoms persist, come back in one week.
  • If these pills don't work, you can come here again and we can try another treatment.
  • You only have the flu. It's very common these days and it's not serious.
  • I need to know something about you so I will ask you some questions.
  • Sometimes I'm dizzy and I feel very bad in general.
  • I need to visit the specialist. I want to visit the cardiologist.
  • I feel really bad and sometimes I feel that I'm going to die.
  • I'm starting to think that I won't be able to fly.
  • I have the feeling that my heart is accelerated.
  • I am not convinced.
  • I'm going on holidays next week. I need Calmozene.
  • My old doctor always prescribed me Calmozene.
  • I have heart palpitations and a big pain in my chest.


CORRECTIONS

Finally, we’ve reached the corrections section! Because this is your last activity, you won’t have an error correction exercise. Let me simply give you some comments and corrections for several of the sentences I encountered while listening to your conversations.


  1. How many times you have the symptoms? --- How long have you had the symptoms?
REASON: The expression “how many times” refers to repetition = “quantes vegades.” Here, however, the doctor wants to ask about a period of time, not a repetition, so the correct expression is “how long.” // The verb is also incorrect. The sentence is missing the auxiliary “have” (the verb tense is present perfect).

  1. Do you follow any treatment actually? --- now, currently, these days
REASON: What do you remember about the word “actually”? It DOES NOT mean “actualment.” It’s a false friend and it means “en realitat.” There are several correct options to refer to the present time (you can see them above), but “actually” is not one of them.

  1. I recommend Tranquil because it is a natural medicine and it don't affect the stomach. --- …it doesn’t affect…
REASON: The pronoun “it” uses the auxiliary “does/doesn’t”. Always be careful and make sure you use the correct verb conjugation with the correct pronouns! Verb conjugation is actually much easier in English, because the only difference is that in the present the pronouns “he/she/it” use an “s”!

  1. You are married or have children? --- Are you married or do you have children?
REASON: The word order at the beginning of the question is incorrect: when making a question with the verb “be”, you need to invert the regular order. The verb “be” goes before the person. // The second part of the question is missing its auxiliary verb. You need to add its auxiliary verb because it is a different verb (it’s not the verb “be”). Let me give you an example:
--- Are you hungry or thirsty? --- In this sentence, the verb “are” is the main verb for both parts of the question. We don’t have to repeat the verb. [Are you hungry or are you thirsty?]
--- Are you tired or do you want to continue walking? --- In this question, we have one part with the verb “are” and another part with the main verb “want” so we need to include the correct auxiliary for “want.”

  1. I come here because I go to vacancies I need another pill because the previous doctor recet me a pill that don't feel good. --- I’m here because I’m going on vacation/holidays and I need another pill because the previous doctor prescribed me a pill that/which made me feel sick.
REASON: There are several mistakes in this sentence. Many of the words aren’t English. Other parts of the sentence can be improved by using more specific words. I suggest a complete rewrite.

  1. Doctor please, could you take me the pressure and temperature? --- Doctor please, could you take my pressure and temperature?
REASON: Somehow, this was a typical mistake in this activity. When we talk about blood pressure or temperature, we never say “take me the” or “take me my”. We simply say “take my.”

  1. I have 31 years old. // I have 25 years old. --- I am XX [years old].
REASON: This is another mistake some students made--and it's an elementary mistake! Don’t forget! In English we never say “have” an age. We ARE our age.

  1. I work for about eight hours for a day. --- …about eight hours a day.
REASON: The original sentence had an extra word. We never say “work XX hours for a day.” Simply eliminate “for.”

  1. Every week you come to visit me and every week I say you the same. --- …and every week I tell you the same.
REASON: We can’t use the verb say + pronoun. This structure isn’t correct. We can, however, use the verb “tell.” What’s more, the verb “tell” has a sense of explanation, so it’s a better option.  Here are a few links with more information on how to use say and tell.

  1. Sorry to treat you of you, but could you take me my blood pressure please?
REASON: See sentence number 6 for the explanation about “take me my blood pressure.” // The first part of this sentence is a literal translation from Spanish or Catalan: Sento tractor-te de tu. --- Tutejar-te. This concept doesn’t exist in English! In English, we only have the pronoun “you” to refer to other people, so this part of the original sentence doesn’t make sense.

  1. My problem is that I have afraid of flying. Really I have a panic of flying. --- My problem is that I am afraid of flying. I feel panic when I fly.
REASON: The original is a literal translation from Catalan or Spanish (tinc por, tinc pànic). This structure doesn’t exist in English. You need to use the verb “be” with the adjective “afraid”: I am afraid. Another option is to use the noun: I have a fear of flying. With the word “panic” you also have different options: I feel panic / I feel panicked.

  1. I'm sorry but I have afraid needles and injections. --- I’m sorry but I am afraid of needles and injections / I have a fear of needles and injections.
REASON: Here the same reason applies as number 11. Always remember that English is a different language, so you can't make literal translations from Catalan or Spanish because most of the time these translations will be incorrect.

  1. Perhaps one day this drug will make you any secondary effects. --- Perhaps one day this drug will give you side effects. // will cause side effects.
REASON: This is a typical mistake most of you made, but it’s a simple one to correct! When talking about the unwanted effects of a medicine, we say side effects, not “secondary effects” (another literal translation).

  1. I think that I will gonna faint from one moment to the next. --- I think that I will faint from one moment to the next.
REASON: The word “gonna” isn’t really a word. It’s a shortened form of “going to”, and it’s not an appropriate thing to use in the English classroom because it is very informal (like slang). In this sentence there are two future forms: “will” and “going to” (gonna). You only need one future form. The correct one to use is "will."

  1. First you have to take the Tranquil and then the Calmozene if it doesn't play. --- …if it doesn’t work.
REASON: A medicine doesn’t “play.” A medicine works.

  1. As you know, I am new in this town and I would like to meet you better. --- … I would like to know you better.
REASON: The verb “meet” has several meanings: to see someone for the first time / to arrange a meeting with someone. In this sentence, you need the verb “know” instead of “meet.” The verb “know” means that you learn about the person, and that’s what the doctor wants to do in this sentence: learn about the patient and understand him better.


Friday, June 13, 2014

CA5 Writing - Error Correction 3

Hello, everyone!

Here you will find some very good expressions you used when talking about films in the class forum. I recommend you all have a look because there are some true gems in here!

GOOD


1.    I've never seen this film, because I don't like drama films. But I think it will be a good movie if it is inspired by true events.

2.    I think it is a beautiful film with a beautiful love story.

3.    I just saw the trailer and I'm intrigued.

4.    The plot is about an ex-convict, called Jean Valjean, who has a difficult life, but he received the help of Myriel who asked him for a change in his life.

5.    Since Matthew McConaughey and Jared Leto won the Academy award, the film caught my attention. I have seen the trailer and it’s fascinating.

6.    I want to see this movie because it’s very difficult to tell a story about AIDS without falling into cliché. 

7.    I have already seen this movie. I think it’s very entertaining and the cinematography is stunning.

8.    You do not know whether to laugh, cry...

9.    The director is Stanley Kubrick, and this is one of the reasons why I want to see it.

10. Thelma & Louise was filmed in 1991 so maybe you saw the movie once, but if you haven't seen yet you should read this review and push the play on your DVD player, because the combination of the plot and the cast puts this movie in an extraordinary place inside the world of the road movies.


11. As a journalist and voracious reader I have to see this movie soon! I'm a declared fan of Truman Capote and his book In Cold Blood  is one of my favourite non-fiction novels.



CORRECTIONS

As usual, there are also some incorrect sentences in the written activity. I've chosen the lucky number 13 for your final error correction exercise! Even though there are more sentences this time, you'll see that by now the corrections you have to make are very easy! I hope to see more people participate in this final exercise!


1.    It is an amazing story. I really liked the movie because you can see how difficult was to convince the author.
à Here there’s a very small mistake: just a missing word. What word is missing?
CORRECTION:
REASON:

2.    This movie is supposed to be interesting, exciting and with mani adventures.
à There’s a spelling mistake here.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

3.    I am agree with the following review.
à Oh, no! The worst mistake you can make!
CORRECTION:
REASON:

4.    I enjoyed with this film. Although, at the moment the film remembered to another film The Sixth Senses.
à Two big errors: wrong structure and wrong word.
CORRECTION:
REASON:
  
5.    I think that this movie is very real, because nowadays some people have a close relative with this ill.
à The word “ill” is an adjective. Do you need an adjective here?
CORRECTION:
REASON:

6.    I have also chosen this film for your actors, Adam Sandler and Drew Barrymore.
à Always be careful with what pronouns you use! You need to be consistent.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

7.    It is a haunting movie; you don’t understand some things until the end where you can see the different way to narrate a ghost story, by the point of view of the ghosts, who are experiencing strange thing into their house.
à Very good sentence! It’s almost perfect!
CORRECTION:
REASON:

8.    Is one of the better science fiction films that I have ever seen, although I’m not lover of science fiction films, but I would recommend it to someone.
à Remember comparative and superlative adjectives?
CORRECTION:
REASON:

9.    Two days ago I see the trailer, and the dark ambience and the special effects are spectacular!
à Past, present or future?
CORRECTION:
REASON:

10. Philippe is a quadriplegic millionaire and when he hires Driss as a nurse, his live will change.  
à What’s wrong here?
CORRECTION:
REASON:

11. In the movie appear different historical moments, as the Vietnam War, the killed of the president Kennedy, the hippy movement, etc. 
à Two incorrect word choices. Why?
CORRECTION:
REASON:

12. I think that I'm sure that I will watch it but, you think that will like me?
à Almost!
CORRECTION:
REASON:

13. I don't like this movie, because there are too much blood in this movie.
à Is the word “blood” countable or uncountable?
CORRECTION:
REASON:

Monday, May 26, 2014

CA4 - Written Task - General Comments + Error Correction

Hello, class!

Now that we’ve completed Activity 4, I would like to give you some general feedback. Below you will find general feedback on the first task of Activity 4 (the written task in the forum). Remember that soon you will receive individual feedback for Task 2 (the Tandem conversation).


GOOD EXPRESSIONS

Here are some excellent expressions you used when applying for jobs. I suggest you have a look at all the examples, because I’m sure you’ll find something new! (Some of these sentences contained very small mistakes, which I corrected in bold.)

1.    I'm writing in response to your advertisement for lifeguard, which I saw advertised on http://www.idealist.org/view/job/hFDkMpw9C3H4/. 

2.    I consider myself a responsable, tidy, methodical and hard-working person, accustomed to work on rotating turns, driving some different trucks (I have all of types of truck driver licenses), and I believe I will be a valuable asset to your great team in Kent

3.    I am writing you to apply for the position of Cirque du Soleil Performer which I saw advertised on your website. As you can see from my attached CV, I have been working as a String Gymnast during 5 years in a Fantasy Circus. I have my own performance with fire

4.    As you can see from my attached CV, I have a lot experience in graphic design in different enterprises and as a freelance I have all the latest versions of PowerPoint and other specific design programmes in my MacProBook.

5.    I consider myself a dynamic and responsible person with initiative and organizational skills. I think these skills might fit in the position that you are offering. I appreciate your attention and I hope to be a valuable contribution to your company.

6.    As you can see from my attached CV, my qualifications include a degree in Multimedia Studies from UOC (Universitat Oberta de Catalunya) and some specialized courses of the most important design programs such as Photoshop, InDesign, Illustrator and Flash.

7.    I think I am a good candidate for this job because I am a hard worker, I love my job, I investigate and improve the current education through new techniques; I try to learn a lot of things every day... I hope you will consider me for this job. I look forward to your reply.


ERROR CORRECTION EXERCISE

And now we have reached your second error correction exercise! The routine is the same: have a good look at the nine sentences below and try to correct them. I have marked the mistakes in red. Write the corrected sentence below and also try to give a short explanation about why the original sentence was incorrect. Send me your corrections to the Exercises forum.

1.    In addition, as you can see from my attached CV, I have been working as pastry chef, and I have worked in different restaurants in Spain and foreign countries, where I prepared desserts.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

2.    I am interested in you advertisement.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

3.    I have worked at several beauty saloons since I was 22 years old.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

4.    I have large experience how lifeguard in differents swimingpools and some experience how beach lifeguard.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

5.    With reference to your advertisement published on Tuesday May 6 in the Forum, I am writting to apply for the position of Reack Truck Driver. 
CORRECTION:
REASON:

6.    I hope you consider me for this freelance job. If you need some references of my lasts jobs I'll keep in touch with these companies.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

7.    Dear Sir, // I saw her job offer as a teacher through the internet and I found very interesting.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

8.    I have experience in all levels of education; I worked in kindergarten and private school as a teacher. I think they are a good candidate for this job.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

9.    I'm a authentic beer fan, I have knowledges of the elaboration process of different beers and ingredients.
CORRECTION:
REASON:



Friday, May 9, 2014

CA3 - General Comments

EXCELLENT EXPRESSIONS

Here are some excellent expressions you used in your trip journals! Please have a look because I’m sure you’ll all learn something new!


·         Josep, me and a guide prepared to explore the Amazonian forest. Suddenly we turned around and we did not see Josep.
·         They obtained energy by sea currents
·         Our incredible trip began 2 years ago, when my friend Laura and I were thinking about an amazing journey to another planet, the famous Night Planet.
·         We stayed in a nice green house with a comfortable porch where we drank refreshing fruit juices at night.
·         We are in debt with this tribe and very grateful for all the things that they taught us. 
·         I remember that when I opened my eyes I was wearing a suit similar to astronauts and I I was breathing through a tube that came out of my back.
·         2101 was the year when the human race decided to colonize another planet.
·         The Island of Dragons is a medium sized island which has a large volcano in the middle. On its slopes there is a forest with giant trees, at the top of the trees live the local people.



CORRECTIONS

Here you will find a selection of corrected sentences. You will see typical mistakes

1.    We was walking through the mountains when we found a cave.
CORRECTION: We were walking through the mountains when we found a cave.
REASON: The verb form is incorrect. With the pronoun “we” the past is “were.”

2.    It exists a waterfall in the valley that offers the possibility to jump from a height of 20 meters into the lake.
CORRECTION: There is a waterfall in the valley that offers the possibility to jump from a height of 20 meters into the lake.
REASON: The expression “it exists” + a noun is a very unnatural expression in English. To say that something exists, we use “there is” or “there are.” When we are referring to something in the past, we use “there was” or “there were.”

3.    We loved Brazil and his culture.
CORRECTION: We loved Brazil and its culture.
REASON: Brazil is a country, not a man. It is gender neutral, not masculine. For more information on possessive adjectives, check this website.


4.    Also we visited a cave inhabited animals and exotic plants.
CORRECTION: Also, we visited a cave inhabited by animals and exotic plants.
REASON: This is a sentence in the passive (“a cave inhabited” = a passive form). Because it is a passive, you are including the agent (“animals and exotic plants”). When you include the agent, you need to use “by.” Here’s a link with information on how to build passive constructions.

5.    The animals, plants and natural phenomena shine with differents colours like diamonds.
CORRECTION: The animals, plants and natural phenomena shine with different colours like diamonds.
REASON: In English, adjectives do not have a plural form. They are always singular.

6.    We never forget this city and their friendly residents.
CORRECTION: We will never forget this city and its friendly residents.
REASON: You are referring to a future action, so the verb should go in the future (in this case, future simple with “will”). The word “city” is in the singular, so the possessive should also be singular.

7.    In a few time we became friends and we participated in all of their cultural activities.
CORRECTION: In a short time we became friends and we participated in all of their cultural activities.
REASON: The concept of “time” is uncountable, so you can’t use “few” with it because “few” is used with countable nouns.


8.    When the machine was finished we proved this project.
CORRECTION: When the machine was finished we tried (out) this project.
REASON: The word “prove” here is acting as a false friend.
Prove = demostrar
In this sentence, you need the verb “try” or the phrasal verb with very similar meaning “try out.”


9.    Do you will return to the island for holidays someday?
CORRECTION: Will you return to the island for holidays someday?

REASON: This question is using a verb in the future tense. The auxiliary verb “do” is only used in the present tense, so it’s an extra word here. For more information on how to construct questions in the future, check this link.


Tuesday, April 22, 2014

Activity 2 - Task 1 - Error Correction Exercise 1

Hello, everyone! In this post, you’ll find some comments on Activity 2, Task 2: your wiki profiles. You’ll also find a new optional (but VERY useful!) exercise.


Overall, I have to say that I’m very happy with your work on the wiki profiles. Most of you chose to do your own personal profile, but some of you decided to make up characters, and both options turned out really well. Congratulations on your hard work!

EXCELLENT EXPRESSIONS

The following are some selected sentences from the different wiki profiles you created. All of these sentences contain excellent use of the language, plus some very good expressions! Great job! Please have a look because I’m sure everyone will find something useful here.

I’m agnostic, but I know different religions. I like learning about any topic I find interesting.

I studied primary teaching at Universidad de Valencia and now I work at a nursery school in Moixent.

I like polite and intelligent people who can talk to me about any topic.

 Do you think it is possible to travel with children?

As a student I had a few odd jobs to earn some money for my expenses

Three years ago I got married with a Catalan guy, he is the reason why I live in Sant Cugat.

5 adjectives that describe you: Sensible, nonconformist, open-minded, sociable, foul-mouthed.

I have two children about 17 and 14 years old, both boys. They are teenagers, so they are at a delicate age... but right now, I think I will survive!

Something I can’t stand: People who make a decision about what type of person you are before they get to know you.


ERROR CORRECTION

In this section, you will find some sentences that contain errors. This will be your first error correction exercise. Have a look at the example. I’ve marked the parts of the sentence which contain errors. Then, I’ve written the corrected version of the sentence and given a reason why the original was incorrect. Can you give it a try?

Please send your error correction exercise to the class forum called “Exercises.” I will post a message on the Notice Board about this.

0. Have you participed in one running race?

CORRECTION:   Have you [ever] participated in a race?

REASON: In the original sentence, the verb was incorrect. //

In the original, the student wrote “one race.” The use of “one” in English is a bit unnatural, since “one” is used specifically to refer to the number “one.” It is used to draw attention (per cridar l’atenció de que només és UN, no dos ni tres, només un, ja que la paraula és una número). Because it is used to draw attention, it sounds strange in this sentence. The most natural way to say “una cursa” in English is simply “a race.” The word “a” is an article, and it is used with singular nouns. //

I decided to eliminate “running.” It isn’t necessary. //

Finally, when asking about things that people have done in their lives (life experience), you can also use the word “ever”: have you ever… (+verb) = alguna vegada has

So that was my example correction! Can you correct the other sentences? This is an optional activity, but I highly recommend it because you will see some common mistakes students make in B.1 level—and you’ll have the chance to correct them! This time I’ll help you and I’ll mark the errors in red!

I recommend you follow these steps:

1) Highlight the sentences and copy them.
2) Paste the sentences in a Word document.
3) Make your corrections in the Word document.
4) When finished, copy all your work and paste it in a message for the Exercises forum.


1. I also really like to travel and now we are planning a travel to Thailand.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

2. I educate childrens from 6-11 years old.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

3. Languages: spanish, catalan, french and italian.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

4. I have a very good couple called Cristina, she is the mother of my two beautiful daughters.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

5. In the actually I return to live with my parents and my sisters. 
CORRECTION:
REASON:

6. Finally I came back to Barcelona in 2007 for living near my family in my hometown.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

7. I'm not religious but I agree with the differents religions. 
CORRECTION:
REASON:

8. There I met my wife, but 2 years after get married we divorced we want different things in ours life.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

9. Now, I'm working like a medical researcher.
CORRECTION:
REASON:

10. I like psychology books because are useful in my life.
CORRECTION:
REASON:



Sunday, April 6, 2014

General Comments - Activity 1 - Task 2

Hello everybody! In this post I will give you some general feedback on the work you did for Activity 1, Task 2 (the LANGblog task). You can listen to a short recording about this post.


First of all, I would like to congratulate everyone who completed this task because you all did a marvelous job! However, I have to reiterate that it's very important NOT TO READ on LANGblog, because we need speaking practice, not reading practice.

Still, you all did a wonderful job suggesting restaurants, and I'm extremely happy to announce that I only heard the infamous (and incorrect) expression "I am agree" once in all the recordings.

Now, let's move on to the comments:

PRONUNCIATION

Here you have a list with some of the most mispronounced words in this activity. I strongly suggest you take a few minutes to look up these words in the fabulous online pronunciation dictionary www.howjsay.com. You can listen to the words as much as you like, and you can practice repeating them!

Cuisine
Contemporary
Idea
Theatre
Dinner - diner
Grilled
Crocodile – not “crocodrile” > Don't add an extra "R"!
Spacious
Hi
Waiter
Pasta – not “paste” > Be careful with the word "paste" because we use it to talk about glue!
Convince
Comfortable
Tasty
Variety > This word sounds like "society".


GOOD

In this section, you'll find a selection of some very good sentences and expressions used by YOU, the students!

Sorry, but I will vote for another option.

I like Italian cuisine, but I prefer other options.

…a bloody steak.

I went to La Huerta a few years ago and I remember we ate…

I think it’s not a good idea to have dinner there together because it’s too far for most of us.


CORRECTIONS

And now we've reached the corrections section! Here is a selection of sentences that aren't 100% correct. Let me give you some comments:


1. …we can go to the Delta de l’Ebre and make cycling around the field rice. > There are two things wrong here: "make cycling" and "field rice."

- make cycling > the verb "make" isn't correct. In English, we go cycling.
- field rice > the word order here isn't correct. In English, the adjective goes before the noun ( for example: a blue car, a big house, a fat dog...). Here, the word "rice" is defining the type of field, so it's almost acting as an adjective. Therefore, we should say rice field.
> Final sentence: ...we can go to the Delta de l'Ebre and go cycling around the rice fields. (I added an "s".)


2. I prefer dinner outside Barcelona because can visit other place.

- The verb "can" is missing the subject: we can.
- The word "other" introduces a plural, not a singular: other places.
> Final sentence: I prefer dinner outside Barcelona because we can visit other places.


3. Your review for the restaurant Teresa Carles it’s very complete.

- The error here is that the student has used a double subject. The subject of the verb "is" = "your review". However, the student says "it is." The word "it" is extra (it is repeating the subject) so it shouldn't be in the sentence.
> Final sentence: Your review for the restaurant Teresa Carles is very complete.
> For more information on repeating (double) subjects, check out this website:


4. You don’t worry because price it isn’t expensive.

- Here, the student wants to use an imperative. However, when we make imperatives, we don't use the subject: Don't worry because... (without "you"). For more information about imperatives: http://www.engvid.com/imperatives-give-commands-directions/
- Here, the student also used double subjects ("price it isn't expensive".)
> Final sentence: Don't worry because the price isn't expensive. (See that I also added "the" because it's necessary.)


5. After check all options, I think yours is the best choice.

- If we use a verb after the word "after", the verb needs to go in the gerund form (-ing).
> Final sentence: After checking all options, I think yours is the best choice.
- The same happens if you put a verb after the word "before": Before checking all options...


6. Desserts are incredible. You’ll enjoy with them, especially if you are sweet tooth.

- The structure at the beginning of the sentence isn't correct. You enjoy something. You enjoy something with someone. For example: I enjoy skiing. I enjoy skiing with my sister. You don't enjoy with something. So here the student is talking about desserts: You'll enjoy them = You'll enjoy the desserts.
- People aren't sweet tooth. People have a sweet tooth.
> Final sentence: Desserts are incredible. You'll enjoy them, especially if you have a sweet tooth.


7. I want to say you that the recommendation seems so good.

- After the verb "say" we don't immediately put the person. We say something to someone.
- To correct this sentence, we have two options:
> I want to say to you that the recommendation seems so good.
I want to tell you that the recommendation seems so good.
- For more information about say and tell, have a look at this link: http://www.englishclub.com/vocabulary/cw-say-tell.htm


8. If you have lucky and the day is sunny like today…

- The word "lucky" is an adjective, so you can't say you "have lucky."
- To correct this sentence, you have two options:
> If you are lucky and the day is sunny like today... (The verb "be" + adjective.)
If you have luck and the day is sunny like today... (This sentence uses the noun: "luck.")